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Magy's 2014 NaPoMo


I've already failed at writing a poem every day of April, but I thought I'd jump into the fun, even though I'm not sure how consistent I'll be...

Hermit’s Song

I don’t like to wake with the sun,
there’s something too-much
in that morning haze,
far-off furl of fluorescence.

I prefer the quiet going away at dusk,
all that the sun leaves behind.
Stronghold of night, safety only possible
when all the world’s doors are shut.

The safety of a moving train,
the certainty of it, hurtling towards
the horizon.
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Magy: Welcome to NaPoMo and you have started off with a BANG!
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Magy,

No, no failure here! I love the way the poem builds up to, and then turns after, this line:

far-off furl of fluorescence.

Fantastic!
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